sky blue reverie ([identity profile] skyblue-reverie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] small_hen 2010-02-12 03:48 am (UTC)

part 2

And, okay, I’m about to get a little sappy here, so avert your eyes:

It made me feel safer than I’d ever felt in my entire life.


I LOVE THIS BIT. Yes, it's sweet. But it's still IC (avert your eyes, hee!) and it's SO heart-melting. Guhhhhhhh. Feeling protected is SUCH a button of mine.

Harry's defensiveness when Perry asks if he's okay is perfect - he knows he's kind of the bottom in the relationship, the caretakee, and that's okay, but he's damn well not going to be treated like a child! It is awesome and perfect, and I love that Perry wasn't even thinking about that, just thinking "oh, I want to fuck him again, I wonder if he's sore". This moment of disconnect between what they're both thinking and what they both assume the other is thinking is so REAL and spot-on for the start of a relationship like this.

Preparation H is a TOTAL WIN, of course.

And Perry having given Harry only a B for effort, after he tried until his jaw ached! Oh, Perry.

And then the exchange during the bj is perfect, and priceless. SO IC, OMG. And funny and sad (more insecure!Harry) and sweet (sort!of!reassuring!and!caretaking!Perry) and guhhhhhhhhh.

Okay, so I did kind of quote the whole fic at you. Oh well. It's awesome, and wonderful, and fabulous, and all kinds of other superlatives. I MEAN IT. *stern face*

I love you, honey, and I love all of your words. *hugs tight*


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