Oh, this is just adorable. You definitely haven't lost your touch, babe! In fact, I demand a sequel where we get to see Tony & Control's date! :p
Your grasp of their voices never ceases to amaze me, and the little touches make it so wonderful - the budget for styrofoam cups in the office, the gift pen, the pigeons!
Quoting time! Here were the lines that were particularly wonderful, although the whole thing was fantastic.
“Gosh, Control. I wonder what that reason could be.” Tony tugged on the sleeves of his ill-fitting grey suit and wondered.
Bwahahaha! He totally would stand there and "wonder." :D
“Oh, Control! You didn’t need to do this for me!” Tony tore into the wrapping paper. “What a lovely white box!”
“The gift is in the box, Tony,” Control said helpfully.
“Hmm…that does make sense.”
Hahahah! That exchange is just so perfectly, perfectly them.
Tony pressed the grey button. For a moment, there was only silence. Then, in Control’s even voice, he heard, “Have a very happy birthday, Tony.”
“I will,” Tony said to his pen.
I absolutely love the image of Tony talking to his pen. Too cute for words!
Then the date! They're totally going on a date! Hahahaha! This is total sweetness, my love, and a huge happy birthday to Msliz and I'm so glad her birthday inspired this lovely fic!
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Your grasp of their voices never ceases to amaze me, and the little touches make it so wonderful - the budget for styrofoam cups in the office, the gift pen, the pigeons!
Quoting time! Here were the lines that were particularly wonderful, although the whole thing was fantastic.
“Gosh, Control. I wonder what that reason could be.” Tony tugged on the sleeves of his ill-fitting grey suit and wondered.
Bwahahaha! He totally would stand there and "wonder." :D
“Oh, Control! You didn’t need to do this for me!” Tony tore into the wrapping paper. “What a lovely white box!”
“The gift is in the box, Tony,” Control said helpfully.
“Hmm…that does make sense.”
Hahahah! That exchange is just so perfectly, perfectly them.
Tony pressed the grey button. For a moment, there was only silence. Then, in Control’s even voice, he heard, “Have a very happy birthday, Tony.”
“I will,” Tony said to his pen.
I absolutely love the image of Tony talking to his pen. Too cute for words!
Then the date! They're totally going on a date! Hahahaha! This is total sweetness, my love, and a huge happy birthday to Msliz and I'm so glad her birthday inspired this lovely fic!
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