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I have sequel fic! Aren't you excited?

Title: Satisfaction Guaranteed
Author: [livejournal.com profile] ennui_blue_lite
Fandom: AOS
Summary: Bones and Jim go shopping for toys. Jim has no idea what he wants. Bones’ solution is … creative. Sequel to Blue.
Rating: M for naughty talk and sex toys
Word Count: 1,587
A/N: Did you know it is physically impossible for me to write porn unless I’m in public? It’s true.
Much love to my beta [livejournal.com profile] skyblue_reverie, who inspired me, loved me, and wrote all of the hard parts for me.

Reading “Blue” first is helpful, but not necessary.



“Whoa, what’s this for?”

Jim picked up a leather harness contraption studded with rivets, spikes, chains, and half a dozen rubbery protrusions. Bones winced. “I’m pretty sure that’s not intended for humanoid usage, Jim.”

Jim placed the heavy item back on the shelf. It clanked. “This store is really poorly organized. I mean, how am I supposed to know what’s human compatible?” Behind the counter, the shopkeeper shot Jim an irritated look. Bones pretended not to notice her.

“Well, here’s a handy rule, Jim. If it looks like it might rip off your genitals, it’s probably not for you.”

Jim rolled his eyes. “You’re need to learn to think outside the box, Bones. Ooh! Look at this.”

Bones closed his eyes and attempted to summon patience. Jim in a sex shop was like a kid in – no, wait, that wasn’t the simile that Bones wanted at all. He was more like a phaser shot in a house of mirrors: bouncing from one corner of the store to the other before Bones could so much as goggle at whatever bizarre contraption had drawn Jim’s eye.

Which, this time, involved cuffs, a wooden post, a device that looked like a giant disembodied latex tongue, and –

“Jim, you are not sticking that anywhere near my ass. Put it back.”

Jim pouted, actually pouted. “Why not?”

“Because, my idea of a good time doesn’t include a lengthy anal surgery at the end. Put it back.”

“You’ve got no spirit of adventure, you know that? Besides, check this out.” Jim flipped a switch on the latex tongue. With a mechanical whir, it began to rotate. Bones suppressed a shudder – he had a feeling that what he’d just seen would be chasing him through a month’s worth of nightmares.

“Jim, look, just – slow down for a minute.” Bones took the offending item from Jim’s hands and placed it on a nearby shelf. “I know some of this stuff is – interesting,” he said, “but maybe we need to narrow our search a little. What, specifically, are you looking for here?”

“Anything, Bones,” Jim said cheerfully. Bones frowned.

“Okay, but…for you? For us?”

“For us,” Jim replied.

“All right. That’s a start. What would you like for us to do?”

“Anything,” Jim repeated. His sure smile faltered, and Bones got it. Jim had no idea what he wanted here, because he had no idea what Bones wanted here. An entire room filled with possibilities, and any one of them could be a checkmark in the column of sexual compatibility or a point in the ‘my god, Jim, what’s wrong with you?’ column. Jim was treating the sex toys like a test, one that he hadn’t studied for and couldn’t afford to fail.

So, naturally, he made a beeline for the most outlandish items in the room the moment he was through the door. How very Jim.

Placing a hand on Jim’s shoulder, he guided him behind a shelf of massage oil and whispered in his ear, “Did you want to go someplace a little more private, so we can talk about this first?”

“Bones,” Jim whispered back, “aren’t we here so we can take this stuff back to someplace a little more private?”

“I’m not trying to take you back to the ship for sex, Jim! I mean – seriously, did you want to go somewhere to talk before we choose?”

“We aren’t here to adopt a puppy, Bones,” Jim whispered. “How much decision-making is really involved?”

“I want to make sure we get something you’ll enjoy.”

Jim grinned at him, that cocky lecherous grin of his that would have fooled anyone who wasn’t Bones. “You know me, I’m up for anything and everything!” As if to emphasize the point, he slapped Bones hard on the shoulder.

Bones tightened his mouth and counted to five. This wasn’t working. “Close your eyes.”

“…Whhhyyyy..?” Jim asked, cocking a wary eyebrow.

“Just close them. Trust me.”

Jim did, and Bones slid an arm around his waist and led him to a nearby shelf. “No peeking,” he added, and Jim closed his eyes again. “Give me your hand.”

“Bones, you’d better not put my hand anywhere –”

“Feel that?” Bones gently extended Jim’s index finger and traced it around the little metal ring. “You know what that is?”

“A cock ring?” Jim said after a moment.

“Exactly. You know what I would do if we bought this?”

“Um…wear it?”

“Nope.” Bones let his lips trail over the tip of Jim’s ear. “I’d slip it around your cock, just as you were starting to get hard for me,” he whispered. “And I’d be the one who decided how long it stayed on…how long you’d have to wait to come. Do you want to try that?”

“Bones…?”

“Did you want to try it, Jim?”

“Yes,” Jim whispered back. His cheeks had developed a slightly flushed tint.

“Then let’s get it.” Bones curled his hand around Jim’s fingers and squeezed them around the ring.

“Follow me,” he added, taking Jim’s arm and leading him again.

“I feel stupid,” Jim admitted as he blindly slipped his new toy into their shopping bag.

“It’s only you and me here, Jim,” Bones said. He neglected to mention the woman behind the counter who was now watching them with curious interest over the top of her book. “No one but us. Here.” Bones stopped at another shelf and took Jim’s hand again.

This time, Jim laughed. “Do you get off on this, Bones? Making me close my eyes and touch rubber cocks?”

“I get off on thinking about sliding that dildo into your ass,” Bones whispered. He leaned in and let his breath play against Jim’s neck and ear. Jim shivered a little against him. “I think about getting you all slick and ready and running this between your cheeks, against your hole. You’d be begging me for it, so damn hard you could almost come just from that – but you couldn’t, because I’d have my little ring holding you back. Would you like for us to try that, Jim? Tell me.”

The rose-colored blush of Jim’s cheeks had gone a deep red, and Bones stepped in front of him to hide the growing tent in Jim’s pants. “Do you want it, Jim?” he asked, and Jim nodded. Into the bag. “This way.”

“…a belt?” Jim asked, his hands skimming over the thin strap of leather.

“No.” Bones slid Jim’s hands along the display model, letting him feel the soft leather, which ended in a small loop where the strap doubled back on itself. Jim frowned, clearly trying not to give away his confusion.

“Restraints,” Bones said, finally. “Four point restraints.”

“Bondage?” Jim asked. Bones could see that he wasn’t averse to the idea – the slight shift of his posture and his slow, controlled breathing attested to that. But Bones wanted more than ‘not averse to.’ While Jim mulled this over, Bones pulled Jim to him.

“Has anyone ever tied you up before?” he asked, his whisper sounding low and husky. Jim shook his head and forgot about controlled breathing, now that Bones’ hard bulge was pressing against his hip. “No,” Bones confirmed. Jim wouldn't have done that; wouldn't have given up control that way. “But I would love to tie you up. I’d keep you spread out and open to me, and then I would worship your body. Do you understand, Jim? You would be all mine, every part of you, and I would tease you and touch you until you were begging me to fuck you. And then, you know what?”

Jim shook his head again.

“I’d give you everything you needed. God, Jim, if you could see yourself right now.” Bones ran a finger from Jim’s temple, down his jaw line, to his lips. “Did you want to get something for me to tease you with?”

“Want you,” Jim murmured, the words all but lost in his panting breath. “Just you.”

“Just me? Just my fingers teasing you?” Bones traced circles on Jim’s neck. “You want to come so bad right now, don’t you? But not here. It’s like that ring’s already around your cock. This is what it’s going to do to you, make you want to come for me, but you won’t be able to. Not until I say.”

Jim groaned. “Let’s go,” he said, not even bothering to keep quiet. “Back to the ship.”

“Don’t you want a new personal pleasure tube?” Bones asked, and if he was enjoying himself a little too much, then what of it? “I’ll even throw in a new marker.”

“Home,” Jim breathed. “Now.”

Bones told himself, as he paid the cashier, that she was probably used to this. Of course she was. No doubt men walked around her shop flushed and panting and sporting obvious erections all the time. He kept his eyes fixed firmly on the ceiling and tried to ignore Jim’s body heat against his back as the woman handed him back his credit chip and said, “Thank you for shopping Pleasure Playground, have a nice day.”

Bones waited for the inevitable quip from Jim – “Oh, I’m counting on it.” It never came. A glance over his shoulder revealed that Jim was so unfocused and glassy-eyed that he probably wasn’t able to see straight. “We plan on it,” Bones filled in for his sex-comatose boyfriend. “C’mon Jim,” he added, “let’s go finish this so we can get some of that blood back to your brain again.”

“Mmm,” Jim said.

Bones took it as agreement.
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Date: 2010-01-08 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saavikam77.livejournal.com
*cracks up* XD Oh, Jim. *pets him* I just love how Bones takes over the situation and gets right to the things that seem to turn Jim on the most. :p

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Date: 2010-01-08 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Yay! Bones knows just how to take care of Jim, doesn't he?

Thanks for reading, I'm glad it cracked u up!

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Date: 2010-01-08 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] samueljames
So funny but then both erotic and emotional. Very nice.

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Date: 2010-01-08 12:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm glad that the emotion managed to break through the smart-alec dialogue I always give them. Thank you for reading!

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Date: 2010-01-08 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com
*giggles* Not exactly the toys I would have bought, but Bones makes quite a show out of it! Wheeeee! :) Hot.

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Date: 2010-01-08 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Bones is quite the showman. I'm sure Jim apreciates his efforts.

Thank you for the comment!

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Date: 2010-01-08 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] savoytruffle.livejournal.com
i love how bones is able to assess exactly what jim's problem is and then helps him work through it in an extremely sexy way.

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Date: 2010-01-08 01:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Bones: sex toy therapist.

Thank you - I love getting crack, but I especially love getting crack from very talented writers, so this is bonus!

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Date: 2010-01-08 01:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fallingcinders.livejournal.com
Omg, their banter is downright hysterical. I love the way Bones so subtly teases Kirk with such gems as “Don’t you want a new personal pleasure tube?” Bones asked, and if he was enjoying himself a little too much, then what of it? “I’ll even throw in a new marker.”


And Bones whispering all the things he anted to do to Jim when they got back to the ship... nnnngh, extremely hot.

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Date: 2010-01-08 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Yay, you liked my callback! *dances*

Bones does have some good ideas, doesn't he? I suspect he'll keep Jim on his toes (it's my own oppinion that, while Jim certainly gets around, he's very vanilla because he can't open up to anyone else about his kinks).

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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Date: 2010-01-08 01:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mintcloud.livejournal.com
Ohhh, Jim. He has such issues, doesn't he? *petpet*

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Date: 2010-01-08 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Endless issues. Which is why it's a good thing he has Bones around.
Thank you for reading!

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Date: 2010-01-08 01:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
The hottest thing about this incredibly hot story is how well McCoy knows his Jim. Jim grinned at him, that cocky lecherous grin of his that would have fooled anyone who wasn’t Bones. made me squeak with delight, and the respnse made me cheer aloud.

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Date: 2010-01-08 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
I don't doubt that Bones is the only person who really knows Jim, *really* knows him, and he can tell in an instant when Jim is wearing his ego like a mask. So I'm glad that line made you squee.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 2010-01-08 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] boldlynaps.livejournal.com
Just talking about sex was hotter than sex. Win.

Bones knows what his Jim needs. ♥

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Date: 2010-01-08 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Yay! That's what I was going for, with the sexy talk and Jim needing Bones.

Thank you for reading.

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Date: 2010-01-08 01:43 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] slash-iirima.livejournal.com
Just read both this and 'Blue' together, love them both! Funny, sexy and surprisingly sweet too, Bones knows how to look after Jim and get him completely wound up at the same time. Fabulous. ^_^

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Date: 2010-01-08 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
EEee! I'm so glad you feel this way! *hugs Jim and Bones*

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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Date: 2010-01-08 01:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] duskyfox.livejournal.com
This was fantastic. I love this little universe you've made.

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Date: 2010-01-08 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Yay! You like it! I don't know if there'll be anymore fics in this universe, but I'm glad ou like what's there.

Thank you for commenting!

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Date: 2010-01-08 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
Well, yum. Sounds like Bones has things well in hand. ;-)

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Date: 2010-01-08 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
He does! And I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for reading!

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Date: 2010-01-08 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kilala10.livejournal.com
That's the quickest way to get out of a sex toy store lol

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Date: 2010-01-08 06:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Indeed.
Thank you for reading and commenting!

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Date: 2010-01-08 05:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slashqueen15.livejournal.com
lmfao, poor jim, so distracted- its a great feeling for you, a little awkward for any wayward strangers lol. this was so funny with a twist of hotness >:}

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Date: 2010-01-08 06:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
I think the shopkeeper enjoyed the show just a little, no matter how collected or professional she was acting (my orginal draft ended with her puttng up a "will return in 15 min" sign and running for the back).

I'm so glad you found this funny and hot! Thanks for reading!

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Date: 2010-01-08 05:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diane-kepler.livejournal.com
Yay for gentle, funny, adorably kinky and hot forays to Pleasure Playground. And yay for McCoy knowing exactly what to do. :)

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Date: 2010-01-08 06:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Pleasure Playground's been around for centuries, I guess - it plays a supporting role in one of my older fics.

Of course McCoy knows what to do. That's why he's McCoy!

Thanks for your comments!

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Date: 2010-01-08 06:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] smiley-bandit.livejournal.com
“let’s go finish this so we can get some of that blood back to your brain again.”

I love it. ^_^

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Date: 2010-01-08 06:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Yay, thank you for mentioning that line! I was especially proud of it!

I'm glad yu liked this, thanks for reading!

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Date: 2010-01-08 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakochan.livejournal.com
All I have to say is "Oh ... My ... GOD". -dies-

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Date: 2010-01-08 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
*revives*

I'm glad you liked it. I'm sorry you died,tho.

Thanks for reading!

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Date: 2010-01-08 11:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blcwriter.livejournal.com
I'm just enjoying the sweetness underlying the snark so very much.

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Date: 2010-01-08 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Yay, my fic has...*counts*...two levels!! Whoohooo! on another note, i need to get me a team jones icon.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Date: 2010-01-08 01:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carolina30363.livejournal.com
I love your sensual Bones and I love how he is able to arouse poor Jim...very well done

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Date: 2010-01-08 05:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm rather fond of sensual Bones myself. :)

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 2010-01-08 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skyblue-reverie.livejournal.com
Well, my darling, you already know (or I hope you know) how very very much I love this series, and this fic. I hope it goes on forever.

I absolutely adore vulnerable!Jim, and a Bones who knows just how to take care of him. Mmmmmm, caretaking!kink.

You totally bring the funny and the sweet and romantic at the same time and that is absolutely my favorite combo in the world. You're a master at it! I bow to your skills.

Favorite line time! So many:

Jim in a sex shop was like a kid in – no, wait, that wasn’t the simile that Bones wanted at all. He was more like a phaser shot in a house of mirrors

I don't care if you've used that joke in another fic, it's well worth repeating, and Jim totally would be a kid in a candy store, and Bones totally would stop himself from thinking that because, eww, wrong. I also love the phaser shot in the house of mirrors imagery - whether or not that's how phasers work, it's an incredibly evocative image of hyperkinetic Jim. I love it.

"Because, my idea of a good time doesn’t include a lengthy anal surgery at the end. Put it back."

Oh, Bones. How I love you. Marry me! Oh, darn, you're already taken. Seriously, tho, this line is just so IC that it's awesome. And scary. And scarily awesome.

Bones suppressed a shudder – he had a feeling that what he’d just seen would be chasing him through a month’s worth of nightmares.

ME TOO, BONES. ME TOOOOO. And OMG your in-person demonstration of what that thing actually looked and sounded like was EVEN MORE INCREDIBLY FUNNY AND SCARY.

His sure smile faltered, and Bones got it. Jim had no idea what he wanted here, because he had no idea what Bones wanted here. An entire room filled with possibilities, and any one of them could be a checkmark in the column of sexual compatibility or a point in the ‘my god, Jim, what’s wrong with you?’ column. Jim was treating the sex toys like a test, one that he hadn’t studied for and couldn’t afford to fail.

So, naturally, he made a beeline for the most outlandish items in the room the moment he was through the door. How very Jim.


THIS. This is where you show what a master you are of what's going on underneath, and you convey it in such a beautiful and such a totally IC way. That's exactly how Jim would be, and that's exactly how Bones would react - with semi-horrified realization followed by fond exasperation. *luffs on them, and you*

HA! I exceeded the comment limit! \o/ Continued in Part 2.


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Date: 2010-01-08 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skyblue-reverie.livejournal.com
...and I'm back. With more quotage.


“Bones,” Jim whispered back, “aren’t we here so we can take this stuff back to someplace a little more private?”

Ahahahaha! I love that Jim assumes Bones has gotten all impatient and wants to go have sex NOW GODDAMMIT. :DDD

Jim grinned at him, that cocky lecherous grin of his that would have fooled anyone who wasn’t Bones. “You know me, I’m up for anything and everything!” As if to emphasize the point, he slapped Bones hard on the shoulder.

Once again, you effortlessly transition from the funny to the poignant. I love that Bones has Jim's number, and I totally love that Jim uses that shoulder slap when he's feeling a bit insecure and wants to hide it. It makes the moment where he does that to Spock in the movie so much richer and more meaningful. Dude, you not only write awesome fic, you actually make the MOVIE BETTER TOO. You're like... magic, bb.

Bones let his lips trail over the tip of Jim’s ear. “I’d slip it around your cock, just as you were starting to get hard for me,” he whispered. “And I’d be the one who decided how long it stayed on…how long you’d have to wait to come. Do you want to try that?”

OMG HOTTTTTTTTTTTT.

“I get off on thinking about sliding that dildo into your ass,” Bones whispered. He leaned in and let his breath play against Jim’s neck and ear. Jim shivered a little against him. “I think about getting you all slick and ready and running this between your cheeks, against your hole. You’d be begging me for it, so damn hard you could almost come just from that – but you couldn’t, because I’d have my little ring holding you back. Would you like for us to try that, Jim? Tell me.”

OMG EVEN HOTTTTTTTEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR how do you even do that you are KILLING ME.

“But I would love to tie you up. I’d keep you spread out and open to me, and then I would worship your body. Do you understand, Jim? You would be all mine, every part of you, and I would tease you and touch you until you were begging me to fuck you.

*explodes* See, you finally did it. You killed me. With sheer hotness. *iz ded* GOD THIS HITS MY POSSESSIVENESS BUTTON SO HARD. And the word "worship" in there is perfect, because it isn't about Bones somehow dominating Jim, it's about him claiming Jim, showing him how amazing he is. *loves this so hard*

“Just me? Just my fingers teasing you?” Bones traced circles on Jim’s neck. “You want to come so bad right now, don’t you? But not here. It’s like that ring’s already around your cock. This is what it’s going to do to you, make you want to come for me, but you won’t be able to. Not until I say.”

At this point, I think I'm pretty much just as sex-comatose as poor Jim. Back in 15 minutes, indeed!

In conclusion, LOVE. And there must be sequels. Many, many porny sequels where they use their toys and where they try the bondage stuff and LOVE EACH OTHER MADLY. The way that I love you. ♥ FOREVER.

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Date: 2010-01-08 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
OMGMASSIVE LONG SKYBLUE CRACK, THE BEST KIND OF CRACK, OH YAY!

*hugs you* Well, thank you for helping me find this series, for the many consultation over chat, and your line suggestions, because, as always, my fics don't exist without your help. So thank you for writing the hard parts for me.

I *so* have the caretaker kink, just like you do, and we both know that Jim badly needs one. Isn't he lucky to have found Bones? Who not only wants to care for him, but took the time to learn him inside and out, and does such a good job of it? A couple of people have commented on that line about a "letcherous look that would fool anyone who wasn't Bones," and I'm thrilled so many people latched on to that aspect of this fic. And I'm thrilled you liked it too.

Oh, yes, I need to take this moment to point out that the tongue device is real, I have seen it. It's about 9 inches long, has a plastic base, *rotates*, and looks like something from a David Lynchian nightmare. Hope you sleep well. :)

As for all of the hottness, well, I kinda cheated. I had no idea what Jim would actually be into, so I just kinda played I was in his place and threw in a lot of my own kinks. *Iz a writer cheet*. So now Jim is into orgasm denial, bondage, and apparently dirty talk in public (as previously stated, I can only write porn in public, so I guess I must have a thing for that).

*Revives you*. Sorry I killed you, Sky. But not really, becase I *love* bringing about death by porn (does that makes me a sadist?) At any rate, Bones is definitly possessive of Jim, and I'm glad that I brought that out in this fic. And I'm also glad that the bondage paragraph came across as more than just, well, bondage. I wanted for Bones to make very clear to Jim that if Jim let Bones tie him up, Bones would be there to care for him and make sure he was all right. And then he'd take him to the brink, because, orgasm denial? Yeah, my thing. Totally.

Well, I think my reply is actually longer than the fic now, so I'll just finish up with a thank you. Thank you for for the fic idea, thank you for fixing it, thank you for letting me come stay with you, thank you for being an amazing beta and an amazing writer and an amazing friend. Love you! <3

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Date: 2010-01-08 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melovetv.livejournal.com
So hot! My God - I've never read a fic with no sex in it that's this hot.

Love how Bones knows exactly how to read Jim, and also turns him into a gibbering mess!

Would love to have been that shopkeeper! ;)

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Date: 2010-01-08 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Ooh! I write good sexless sex fics. *iz paradoxally proud*

I'd have loved to have been the shopkeeper too, but we may have to wait in line.

Thanks for reading and commmenting!

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Date: 2010-01-08 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com
This is even better than I hoped when I heard about it! funny, and hot and sweet and awesome. :D

I'm totally picturing this going down in Good Vibrations on Valencia.

woo hoo!

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Date: 2010-01-08 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
*Adds "Good Vibrations" to list of stores I must one day visit here, just under "Ikea".*

I'm so glad you liked it! When I told you about it, I wasn't sure it would even get finished.

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Date: 2010-01-08 11:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] malcolm-stjay.livejournal.com
Oh man oh man.

Fantastic.

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Date: 2010-01-08 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Oh my God, your icon! That is so wrong.

But you liked the fic, so yay to that!

Thanks for reading!

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Date: 2010-01-09 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weepingnaiad.livejournal.com
GUH! I love it when Bones knows Jim better than Jim knows himself, and then uses it to show Jim just how good letting Bones be in charge really is!

Lovely!

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Date: 2010-01-09 11:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
I am a very big fan of Jim: in charge of enterprise, Bones: in charge of Jim. I think it just works out best for everyone that way.

THank you for reading!

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Date: 2010-01-09 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loveflyfree.livejournal.com
ahahahah fantastic! hilarious and hot and sweet all at the same time. good stuff.

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Date: 2010-01-09 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ennui-blue-lite.livejournal.com
Thank you! i'm glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading, and for commenting.
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